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Post by autumnbeauty on Aug 9, 2008 15:31:02 GMT -5
Name:darkpaw
Gender:female
Clan:iceclan
Position:apprentice
Apperance:tortoiseshell shecat with ambereyes. she has a yellow splothch running up her nose to her left ear.
Personality:very calm and cold to certain cats. shes very mature and intelligent for her age.
History:she is the only surviving cat of a litter and she thinks badly of the leader. she is very picky of her friends, but is honorable to the code and clan.
Roleplaying example: Darkpaw hissed as she watched her leader pad past her. she flicked her tail and walked over to the fellow apprentices who were sparring with each other. she hated the fact that she was the only one who saw it. that she was the only one who knew of their clans weakness. she knew soon she would need to do something about it.
Code words: lemonade, rasberry
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Post by Willowstar on Aug 15, 2008 11:39:27 GMT -5
Okay, pretty good but remember to capitalize first letters of a sentence. A few misspellings also but I'm not that picky. I would like it though if you added more onto the appearence. Like what body type and how tall/short/long she is, thanks!
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